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The Story of Barty the Cheater


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Not a terrible read in all.  Honestly I came up with the idea while doing the dishes yesterday and the article turned out better than I thought it would.  Give it a read.  

 

Who here knows which player I'm talking about?

 

I'd also like to see if you can identify the metaphors. 

 

http://www.monkeywithahalo.com/2013-articles/november/barty-s-story.html

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You always add qualifiers when you post your articles ("turned out better than I thought it would," "more interesting than it sounds," etc.).  Own your work and be proud of it.  If you qualify it constantly, it makes me (and others, I would assume) not want to read it.

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You always add qualifiers when you post your articles ("turned out better than I thought it would," "more interesting than it sounds," etc.).  Own your work and be proud of it.  If you qualify it constantly, it makes me (and others, I would assume) not want to read it.

 

 

Solid advice right there.  

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